Synopsis and Personal Response

Synopsis of idea

A girl is walking home and when she is on her way home she is followed by a boy. She notices the boy following her and she starts walking faster. When she gets to the alley way she starts to run and he starts chasing her. He grabs her and attacks her. She is left dead on the floor. We then go to a skyline panoramic view and there is dialogue from the detective as a voice over. We then go to the scene of the crime and the detective is looking at the scene and the dead body. The scene will fade to black and a famous quote will be said and then the credits will appear.

I think this idea is good. We can work on the idea and improve it a lot and change the way it works. The quote will be very effective because it will set the scene of what has happened. The panoramic view of the town is also good because it set the scene of what type of area the film is set in; suburban, industrial etc. I like our idea because it is exciting and will be fun to create.